兩句英語翻譯

我的譯文如下：On July 11 of the lunar calendar, 1405 AD
The Mid-autumn Festival, which falls on August 15 of the Chinese lunar calendar, is one for moon worship.
把時(shí)間翻譯成In 1405 July 11th of the lunar calendar是不正確的，因?yàn)槟昕隙ㄒ旁诤竺?，具體到哪一天，要用介詞on, 而不是in.第二句話的譯文The Mid Autumn Festival in lunar calendar in August fifteen, people worship the moon festival中，people 前面的The Mid Autumn Festival in lunar calendar in August fifteen在此句中沒有做句子的任何成分，是不正確的，可以改為 On the Mid-autumn Festival， August 15 of the lunar calendar, people worship the moon. 人們是拜月，而不是拜節(jié)日。